She had been there for hours surrounded by ice as the sun peeped it’s head over the distant mountain on the horizon, an orange and yellow hue filled. The sky, the warmth of the sun was a gesture of kindness to her frozen hands which she clasped together in front of her trembling body it was then that she heard it crack. It was as if the would in front of her was breaking in two cracked. The ice went down with the girl and stayed alive for an hour in the ice. a couple of years the doctors heard from the police that they found a girl dead in the at antarctica in the ice drown deep down the ocean then they said that bravely were coming were on the way to ambulance and police and most of the team was going. killers saw her body in the ice and likely they got there fast as and the killers said get those foulks the police distract them well the ambulance got the girl the doctors said what’s your name. Maya ok maya were gonna take you to the hospital you know where it is AUCKLAND yay maya maya can you hear me. To be continued.
maya can you hear me what have we done i want to see my no no no sobbing we tried to heal her but it’s not working were sorry dad hhh mum maya whoo year clapping i miss you cause together all we are a family whoo your fine year when are we aloud to take our daughter today if you want to we got crunches.ok we will ( l will wait about this soon)!!
Kia Ora Elijah, i like your story about the split. I have one question Can you make your size smaller in the middle plz? . i also have something to work on for you can you plz make your size smaller plz, Nga Mihi. Misty-Rose
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ReplyDeleteyou did a good job on your split but can you make all the words big