Monday, August 16, 2021

 He thrust out his lead leg and energetically vaulted over the hurdle. The resistance from the water made the 110 metre hurdles tricky (much more difficult than on land!), yet the athlete was responding well to the added challenge and pressure. After all, this was the first Olympic Games to be held under the sea…                                                                                          


Someone always wanted to win and he did. Because he trained 2 years already then he had one million trophies. Almost one million trophies door creaking alarm alarm alarm hey. laser door mini guns out. Ha ha hey… man let's… ha ha talk about this crack. What time is it? It’s 9:O'clock 9:O'clock I'm late for the race then he gets his stuff ready. He booked his flight to go to Hastings. It starts in the afternoon. He made it in time. He said am I late, no Jackson, you're early. yay wait what happens now. you go first whoo hoo. Yay you did it yes yes yes i will win this splash

Well there you go the brave man comes and win oh man. we did it for new zealand new zealand comes 1 england comes 2 brazil comes LAST you did it for the whanau. and australia comes 3 you did good my friend thank you and for that you earn a trophy did you hear that brother we got a trophy for each other whoo hoo do we actually keep it who knows i've never tried. Yay let’s go yay whoo hoo year now where talking year a whoo shh mum dad  we had a trophy. From who from new zealand.






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12 comments:

  1. You have some great describing words Elijah, in your story.I like the way that your words made me feel like I was there experiencing the run.

    I need a sleep now...I'm exhausted!

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  2. Good afternoon Elijah.
    I hope you and your whanau are staying safe in your bubble.
    What cool things have you been doing during this extended time off school?.

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  4. Good morning Elijah.
    I deleted my previous comment because I missed out a word and the sentence didn't make sense.


    The sun is shining and it's a beautiful day.
    I can't wait to see what you have been doing during this break from school.
    Take care.

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  5. Kia Ora Elijah.
    I am just leaving a message to wish you a happy day.Take care and keep warm.I have just been outside and IT'S cold!.

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  6. I am just leaving a message to wish you a safe and happy week Elijah.I hope you are enjoying this extra time off school.

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  7. Good evening Elijah.
    Just a message to wish you a wonderful week.

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  8. I look forward to seeing what you have been doing during this unexpected break from school Elijah.

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  9. I am looking forward to seeing you at school tomorrow Elijah.

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  10. I am looking forward to your next blog post Elijah.

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